When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been often argued that it is more advantageous to have a job with a high wage even if they do not have satisfaction with it.

However

, I think, I totally agree with the above-mentioned statement and earning more

income

is much more important. On the one hand, wealth is necessary in order for the community to meet their basic needs of

life

.

This

is because each one requires more

income

today’s

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contemporary world.

For example

, In the UK nationalities need a huge budget for housing if renting, daily meals and paying taxes and bills including water and electricity,

therefore

, If a father fails to earn enough money simultaneously, the whole family can be affected differently

such

as they get many issues to pay to the mortgagee, at the same time, it might be a legal issue for them. On the

second

hand,

today’s

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world, if there is no balance with a small

income

parents tend to do

actively

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more than one

jobs

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job

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. They are seeking few careers for increasing budgets and supporting

family

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families

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giving the

children’s

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children

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higher education almost all defenders, and keeping fit for family members.

This

leads to

suffer

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them to maintain

quality

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their quality

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of

life

.

For instance

,

teenagers

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for teenagers

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to complete their medical or nursing degree essential around more than 100 thousand Dollars in Sri Lanka. The parents, especially the father

tends

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to do part-time jobs for assisting them.

As a result

,

such

parents struggle during

this

academy course that some of them might get numerous medical problems due to the tension of

work places

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and without leisure time. As an illustration, ‘The Times’ newspaper says the reason for the higher suicidal percentage worldwide takes

second

place among 40 to 50 middle age group due to extend over time.

To

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contrast, when people have more salary in a job are

resulting

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inresulting

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the

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quality of

life

and

healthier

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society.

Finally

, no luxury

life

because no large portion of

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Capital

Income

in the country and fluctuating healthier

life

everybody

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nowadays. As an explanation, Adults and children in Sri Lanka have feelings of pleasure, when getting more comfortable

on

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them. In another word, since people can fulfil their vital present and future plan, the satisfaction remains for a longer period of their journey. In conclusion,

nevertheless

, I strongly believe

that is

more beneficial for receiving a higher payment than well-being in a career with a fewer amount of salary, in light of the fact that people feel pleasure and motivate when their bank accounts get a lot of cash with satisfaction end of each month and enjoy those who are in single or with family.