The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
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The provided image illustrates the silkworm’s life cycle and
silk
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cloth’s steps in production. From an
overall
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perspective, there are four significant steps in
silkworm’s
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the silkworm’s
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wheel-of-life
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wheel of life
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which are egg,
larva
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, cocoon and adult
moth
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, and there are six in silkworm’s cloth production, namely, selecting, boiling, unwinding, twisting, weaving, and dyeing.
According to
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the first diagram, the life cycle commences when the
silk
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moth
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lays its eggs on the mulberry leaves.
Then
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, it takes ten days to become a silkworm
larva
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. After four to six weeks, they turn into
silk
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thread. Three to eight days later, the
larva
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changes into a cocoon. After sixteen days, the
larva
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finally
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transforms into
the
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an
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adult
moth
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. To make the
silk
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cloth in the
second
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diagram, the selected cocoons are first boiled in boiling water in a container.
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, in order to be threaded in 300 to 900 meters, the cocoons must be unwound. Fourth, the
silk
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moth
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's thread must be twisted before it can be dyed.
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, the
silk
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cloth is weaved after it has been dyed.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, second".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words silk, larva, moth with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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