The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
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The provided image illustrates the silkworm’s life cycle and
silk
cloth’s steps in production. From an
overall
perspective, there are four significant steps in
silkworm’s
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the silkworm’s
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wheel-of-life
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wheel of life
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which are egg,
larva
, cocoon and adult
moth
, and there are six in silkworm’s cloth production, namely, selecting, boiling, unwinding, twisting, weaving, and dyeing.
According to
the first diagram, the life cycle commences when the
silk
moth
lays its eggs on the mulberry leaves.
Then
, it takes ten days to become a silkworm
larva
. After four to six weeks, they turn into
silk
thread. Three to eight days later, the
larva
changes into a cocoon. After sixteen days, the
larva
finally
transforms into
the
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an
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adult
moth
. To make the
silk
cloth in the
second
diagram, the selected cocoons are first boiled in boiling water in a container.
Second
, in order to be threaded in 300 to 900 meters, the cocoons must be unwound. Fourth, the
silk
moth
's thread must be twisted before it can be dyed.
Finally
, the
silk
cloth is weaved after it has been dyed.
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