You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: – Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired – Ms in computer science, – Your energy and enthusiasm for the job – Your past experience in a similar position

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to apply for a job at your company that was posted in a local newspaper called "The CC Times" on 26, January
,
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2022. Please refer
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attachment for my resume. To commence with, I
have
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pursued a master's in Computer Science in 2012. As part of
this
course
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I have developed mobile and web
application
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.
Moreover
, I have an experience
of
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full
application
lifecycle management. I think these skills perfectly fit
to
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your requirements. Moving
onto
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my interest,
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is one of my dream
company
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I am excited to join your organisation. I heard that you have a great work culture,
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flexibile
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and convenient timings,
allows
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telecommuting, and
provides
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the best
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for employees.
Lastly
, I have 8 years of similar experience as
a
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application
developer. At present, In
this
designation, I am responsible for,
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collaborating

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collobrating
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with stakeholders to gather requirements, develop the particular software based on specifications collected, and deploy
this
application
to clients. Please respond at your earliest convenience!. Yours Sincerely, Rana
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