You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: – Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired – Ms in computer science, – Your energy and enthusiasm for the job – Your past experience in a similar position

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to apply for a job at your company that was posted in a local newspaper called "The CC Times" on 26, January

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2022. Please refer

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to an

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attachment for my resume. To commence with, I

have

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pursued a master's in Computer Science in 2012. As part of

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course

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I have developed mobile and web

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application

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applications

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, I have an experience

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full

application

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lifecycle management. I think these skills perfectly fit

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your requirements. Moving

onto

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my interest,

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is one of my dream

company

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companies

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I am excited to join your organisation. I heard that you have a great work culture,

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flexible

flexibile

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flexible

and convenient timings,

allows

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telecommuting, and

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the best

insurace

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insurance

for employees.

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, I have 8 years of similar experience as

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application

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developer. At present, In

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designation, I am responsible for,

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collaborating

collobrating

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collaborating

with stakeholders to gather requirements, develop the particular software based on specifications collected, and deploy

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application

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to clients. Please respond at your earliest convenience!. Yours Sincerely, Rana

rana Fri Jun 17 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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