The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages
The pie chart provides information about the percentage of
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university students in England, who usually talk various languages rather than English, in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, we can see that
spanish
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Spanish
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has the
higest
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highest
portion in 2000 and 2010. Another
language
was high in 2010. No other
language
was
bigher
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higher
bigger
in 2000. French and two other
language
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languages
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were similar in 2000 and 2010. In terms of 2000, no other
language
was equally 20%. French below 20%. German and two other
language
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languages
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, both were the lowest percentage, which
equally
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10%. Spanish had the
bigest
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amount among
other
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the other
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several
lahguage
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language
languages
, which was above 25%. With
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regards
of
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2010, there
also
the
lagest
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lowest
amount was
spanish
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Spanish
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, which
around
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was around
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30 to 30
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. No other
language
, French, Germany
were
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equal, which was
exacly
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exactly
10%.
Anither
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Another
language
was nearly 19%, which
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is alsp
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alsp
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also
bigher
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bigger
higher
in
this
year.

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