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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I forgot my handbag on one of your recent flights to London, I realized that I am missing my bag when I got to the hotel. The handbag has a label on it with my name and phone number. It is medium size briefcase, blue in colour with black lines on the sides. Inside the handbag, there are two t-shirts, one pair of shoes, sunglasses, a fiction book and the souvenir gifts which I bought for my friends from Africa. Kindly ask you to find my briefcase and deliver it to the hotel where I am staying now or contact me via mobile number which you can find on the bag label. Thank you in advance and looking forward to hearing from you back. Kind regards,
Sattor
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Sattar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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