You are planning to spend a weekend at a hotel with your family. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Include the following: when you want to arrive and leave/ explain the type of rooms you would like and ask how much they will cost/ ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear manager, I am writing

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letter to you to make arrange my holiday. I decided to spend my vacation with my family in your hotel.

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, I decided to book my room online but because of some reasons I prefer to get confirmation from you. We will arrive on 3rd June at 14 pm and probably stay at your hotel until 8th June.

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, my performance is an ample sea view room with full facilities

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as Sauna and Jacuzzi with one-bed connect room for my children.

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, I want to know about its cost because I have limited financial resources.

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, I am anxious to know about your indoor facilities as well as other entertainment which suitable for us and our little children,

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, I interested in know about all tourist attractions near your area if you introduce me I can search on the internet and choose the best of them. Thank you for taking your time and your consideration of my letter. I looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Salehi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accommodation
Arrival and departure
Sea view
Family suite
Cost estimate
Activities and amenities
Water sports
Cultural sites
Natural attractions
Places of interest
Confirmation of booking
Warm regards

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