You need to borrow some money to pay for something you need for your work or studies. Write a letter to your bank to ask for a loan. In your letter introduce yourself and ask for a loan say why you need the money explain how you plan to pay the money back You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir I am writing to you to get some
money
to pay something in
this
letter. I want some loan in your
bank
and ı will tell you why ı want a loan in your
bank
. My name is Furkan Oz and ı am a math teacher which is a primary school. I have a home where is
the
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near your
the
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bank
. ı want to ask Could ı borrow some
money
from your
bank
? I want to buy a car
Although
the car is so expensive and ı have not enough
money
,so ı want to apply to borrow some cash
money
. ı have just fifteen thousand dollars and ı have to need forty-five thousand dollars . I will pay
to
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you with interest five years later If you give me
money
, .ı know that it is so much
money
but ı need
this
money
for the car. I am waiting for your answer . I look forward to catching up with you soon Yours Sincerely Furkan Oz
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