You need to borrow some money to pay for something you need for your work or studies. Write a letter to your bank to ask for a loan. In your letter introduce yourself and ask for a loan say why you need the money explain how you plan to pay the money back You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir I am writing to you to get some
money
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to pay something in
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letter. I want some loan in your
bank
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and ı will tell you why ı want a loan in your
bank
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. My name is Furkan Oz and ı am a math teacher which is a primary school. I have a home where is
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near your
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bank
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. ı want to ask Could ı borrow some
money
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from your
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? I want to buy a car
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the car is so expensive and ı have not enough
money
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,so ı want to apply to borrow some cash
money
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. ı have just fifteen thousand dollars and ı have to need forty-five thousand dollars . I will pay
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you with interest five years later If you give me
money
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, .ı know that it is so much
money
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but ı need
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money
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for the car. I am waiting for your answer . I look forward to catching up with you soon Yours Sincerely Furkan Oz
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