You have bought an item of clothing at an online store. However, when the item arrived it was the wrong size and colour. Write a letter to the customer service manager of the company. In your letter • describe the problem • say how you feel about this • say what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment at a delivery error from your online supplier
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and to request an immediate exchange of goods. I ordered an aqua blue coloured dress (reference number 0859368) in size 10.
However
, the dress that was sent to me was a navy blue colour and a size 16. I spent a great deal of time ensuring the details on my order form were correct before I submitted it.
This
situation is frustrating, as I was planning to wear
this
outfit to an important social occasion
next
Friday, 17 March, and have bought a pair of shoes and accessories to match. These items do not match the navy blue dress that has been sent. I would like a replacement to be delivered well before
this
event. Please ensure that you deliver the correct item to my home address, by courier, within the
next
24 hours. I look forward to your prompt reply and a swift exchange. Yours faithfully, Komal Handa
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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