On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of the company – describe the item lost – explain how you lost it – tell the insurance company what you would like them to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to bring to your notice the valuable item that I lost,while I was on a vacation to Dubai.Though I had insurance still, the emotions attached to it are precious.
Firstly
, the smartwatch that I had lost was as precious, as my wife had gifted me on my recent anniversary.
Although
it was a brand new Apple series 7 watch with a black leather belt it had no scratch on the glass just a small dent on the back of the charging slot.
Moreover
, because of peak hour time. there was a lot of rush on Metro and I think that's the moment I lost it. Traffic that day was very much because it was Friday and people were in hurry to not miss the afternoon's prayer.
Finally
, I would love to have the lost watch again but it doesn't seem that way I would want you to refund the Insurance amount in my account so that I can have the pleasure of wearing it again soon. Looking forward to an update from you soon. Your's sincerely Tushar K Patel.
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