You recently heard about some new jobs at a local department store. You would like to work there. Write a letter to store manager of the department store. In your letter, -Explain how you heard about the job -Describe the kind of job you would like to have -Give details of your experience and qualifications

Dear sir/madam, I m writing
this
letter regarding a job opening at your store, I would like to apply for a job. To commence with, I came across your vacancy at your place by one of my friends. As he was passing by queens street, he saw a billboard in regards to job applicants for different designations at one of your departmental outlets.
Additionally
, the post of store manager is still empty in your outlet, I would like to apply for that as I was seeking that post for the past few months. As I
also
know it requires more effort to manage the staff as well as the stocks. Apart from
this
, I have recently persuaded my bachelor's of commerce, I can utilise my knowledge in bookkeeping and stock maintenance.
Moreover
, I
also
had an experience in the same as I served at all mart shops in Colaba. Where I grabbed good communication skills with customers. I look forwards to receiving a positive revert from you soon. Yours sincerely, Vandana Patel.
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