You recently bought an item online. When it was delivered you found that the item did not work correctly. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, • Describe the item and the problem with it • Explain why the item is important for you • Say what you want the manager to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
The pronoun I should always be capitalized.
It appears that the word bluetooth may be a proper noun in this context. Consider capitalizing the word.
It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb connect. Consider changing it.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction Whenever. Consider removing the comma.
The pronoun I should always be capitalized.
The singular countable noun gadget follows the quantifier any of, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.
If you don’t want anniversery to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
If you don’t want anniversery to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The pronoun I should always be capitalized.
It seems that option may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
The verb have is usually in the gerund form when following the word Looking forward to. Consider replacing it with the -ing form.
It appears that the phrase earliest response does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.