You recently bought an item online. When it was delivered you found that the item did not work correctly. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, • Describe the item and the problem with it • Explain why the item is important for you • Say what you want the manager to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Madam, I am writing
this
letter about a faulty
item
that
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purchased on your website, and to request a refund. The
item
is a Sony
bluetooth
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Bluetooth
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speaker model C52213 serial no 12034, which was delivered yesterday.
However
,
this
is not getting
connect
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either with T.V or mobile phone. I have gone through the instructions carefully and tried to connect it but failed. Whenever
,
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i
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am scanning the device in any of the
gadget
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, it is showing no device found. I ordered
this
item
for the 25th wedding
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anniversary
anniversery
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anniversary
celebration party of my parents which is due in
next
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two days.
However
, it seems that
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will need to look for other
option
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locally now,
therefore
I would like to return
this
product and request a full refund. I do not want to exchange the
item
because it has failed the purpose for me. Looking forward to
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earliest
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response in
this
matter. Yours faithfully, Komal Handa
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • purchase
  • non-functional
  • malfunctioning
  • refund
  • replacement
  • repair services
  • model
  • affecting
  • intended use
  • describe
  • delivered
  • online order
  • customer satisfaction
  • inconvenience
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