More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

To be honest I do not believe that

bicycles

are the best mode of transport in the cities.

to begin

with there's

lack

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of bicycle lanes and trails in most towns.

Secondly

lack of storage as result many will

loose

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them to thieves.

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some people are disabled they are not able to use them .They can not be used in case of emergency because they're slow , imagine carrying a pregnant woman on

bike

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the bike

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to the hospital.Another

drow

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back is travel will be limited for one can not travel long distances using a bicycle .The final limitation is that they have poor lighting which can cause a lot of accidents during the night and rain season.Some

bicycles

do not have view mirrors which is a recipe for disaster .

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at

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another angle

bicycles

can be the best mode of transport in the cities.Due to the fact that a lot of people do not like exercising , riding a bicycle to work will be the easiest exercise whilst you're going to your destination .

As a

result

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this

leads to a healthier life . Reducing the risk of diabetes , cardiovascular diseases as well as depression .

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it helps

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calories

to

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those who suffer

with

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obese

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and builds strength

increases

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balance. Another important merit is it safe money because they are cheaper to purchase .The use of

bicycles

also

saves on

fuel

for some of them they don't need

fuel

and for those that need it the consumption is low ,

therefore

other projects that

needs

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fuel

will have adequate

fuel

.

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it's smooth to manufacture the parts as an

out come

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outcome

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the service will be

affordab

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affordable