The charts below show comparisons of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The charts below show comparisons of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
The provided pie charts demonstrate the
percentage
of various
nutritions
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, namely carbohydrates, protein and fat in three distinct
diets
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the proportion of fat in
three
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diets
accounted for the lowest. Another striking feature is that the
percentage
of protein
nutritions
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nutrition
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in the average
diet
and healthy
diet
was similar.
To begin
with, the proportion of carbohydrates in
healthy
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diet
and
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
for sports was
ranked-first
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at 50% and 60% respectively, compared to 40% in the average
diet
. The
percentage
of protein in the average
diet
was similar to the
percentage
of carbohydrates at 40%. The figure for
healthy
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diet
and
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
for sports stood at 30% and 25% respectively. It can be seen that the proportion of fat was the
ranked-
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ranked last
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last
in three distinct
diets
. The
percentage
of fat in a healthy
diet
for sports just accounted for 15%,
while
the figure for
two
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remaining
diets
had a similar
percent
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of 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, diets, diet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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