Write a description of your house or apartment. What kind of house/ apartment is it? Where is it exactly? What rooms does it have? Does it have any special features? Describe the neighborhood. How far is it from places of interest? What public transportation is there? Who is the house/ apartment sutable for? Are there any restrictions?

Bali is an Indonesian island known for its forested volcanic mountains, beaches and coral reefs.
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situated in one of the most beautiful forests in Bali.
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dream house has a large bedroom with a queen_size bed and a glass bathroom with a special view of the volcano. there is a modern and well_equipped living room and kitchen. there is a nice patio and a swimming pool with a forest
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. the house is near a spectacular beach, where you can sunbathe. it's
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walk from plenty of restaurants and
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and a spacious water park.
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house is perfect for a couple's honeymoon to record memorable moments in a dreamy and beautiful place.
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