You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to store manager. In your letter, Complain about the problem. Propose action for the store to take. Request conformation that this is agreed

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain about my Samsung mobile phone which I purchased from your store
last
week. It is one of the latest models and has a high-resolution camera. Unfortunately, when I tried to capture some photographs at home, resulted in low-quality images.
Moreover
, when I tried to
listen
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music, the sound of music was
also
very low. I tried all the manual instructions, even I
also
talked to one of your support people on my cell phone. Neither the manual instruction nor his advice improves the quality of the pictures and sound.
Therefore
, I want you to either replace
this
mobile with a new one or refund my money. I hope you will understand
this
matter and take action quickly to solve
this
issue. Kindly inform me which condition is agreed for you. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Mallika Wadhwa
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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