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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter, remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear
Mr.
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 Parghi, I am Utsav Patel, who sat
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 to you on a flight from Toronto to Calgary on May 15th. You gave me your business card after hearing about my passion to
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 in a restaurant. I am writing regarding my keen interest to
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 in one of your restaurants as a cook. You were kind enough to suggest
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 that I should contact you if I ever want to
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 in a restaurant. As I mentioned in our conversation, I am studying in a food technician course which will finish within a month. I have
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experience to
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 as a cook in a reputed restaurant
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 Toronto for about 1 year.
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, I have a certificate
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 professional cook which I got from
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Conestoga College. I am positive that my skills and
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 will be useful to your organization. If you have any
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, please contact me at the email address or a phone number provided on my resume. Your
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Sincerely
, Utsav Patel
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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