You have a full-time job and also doing a part-time evening course. You have find out that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter, 1) describe your situation 2) explain why you can not continue at this time 3) say what action you would like to take.

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Dear Sir/Mam, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that I will not be

attend

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attending

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evening

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the evening

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class due to some family reasons. As you know I am living apart

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from

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form

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from

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my parents for more than 3 years and by god's

grace

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,grace

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they got

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a visa

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visa

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last

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week and planned to visit

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apply

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my place

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week. My schedule is very tight

however

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I want to spend some quality time with my elders and take them

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some special places. In order to make some room in my day,I cannot

disconutinue

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discontinue

my Job to run family expenses

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, I took a decision to take a break from

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additional activity I am doing in the evening. As you know how important

this

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course is for me to excel in my career so I am planning to rejoin

this

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course

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month so that I can appear in an exam

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month. I would really appreciate

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it if

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you can accept me in your

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batch and I promise that I will never miss any class in future. Looking forward to

see

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seeing

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your response! Thanks, Radha

Submitted by radha94646 on Fri Aug 26 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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