You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I received a letter from you

last

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week notifying me to acknowledge the acceptance of a new bank

card

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but surprisingly, I could not find the

card

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in the envelope. I am worried that the

card

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may fall out on its way to my home. Somebody might pick it up and misuse it for their benefit. Most importantly, I am concerned that it might be used for payments that are illegal. In

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a situation, authorities might trace back to my bank account and I might be accused of these illegal activities.

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, I would like to request you block the missing

card

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immediately to prevent possible negative consequences. The longer it takes to block the

card

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, the more chances it will be misused.

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, could you please send me a new

card

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within

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week? As I have to travel abroad on the coming weekend, I would really need to get it within

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week. I’m really concerned about

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unfortunate incident, and I hope you could manage to prevent unnecessary troubles in time. Your prompt support on my requests would be really appreciated. Yours Truly, Zay Yar Myint.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

203 words

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