Some people think that an employee should change his career or field of work at least once. However, other think that employees should not change his career and stay in the job for the entire life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

#people #employee #change #career #field #work #employees #job #life

Changing the

job

roles from

one

field

to another

field

is the upcoming trend in

today

Change noun form

today's

show examples

world. While many people suggest it is a good choice and an equal amount of people are against it. The essay will argue on the

above mentioned

Add a hyphen

above-mentioned

show examples

statement which relates to changing careers is not advisable using a pragmatic approach. To commence with, employees tend to leave their own

career

Fix the agreement mistake

careers

show examples

and opt for different a

career

because of various reasons. The main reasons according to me are no

career

growth, low wages,

lack

Correct word choice

and lack

show examples

of opportunity.

For example

, if an employee has

educational

Add an article

an educational

show examples

background in pottery and a very less number of companies are recruiting people with

this

qualification and offer

less

Change the quantifier

fewer

show examples

wages, as

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

pottery is

one

among

Change preposition

show examples

the extinction fields there won’t be

much

Correct quantifier usage

many

show examples

career

opportunities. In

this

situation

Add a comma

,situation

show examples

an employee has to change

Add an article

the field

show examples

field

Fix the agreement mistake

fields

show examples

for his livelihood. Another crucial factor in the aforementioned statement is that if

Change the article

show examples

workers

Change the noun form

worker

show examples

prefers to have

settled

Correct article usage

a settled

show examples

life,

job

Correct word choice

and job

show examples

security and

want

Correct subject-verb agreement

wants

show examples

to excel in their own

filed

Correct your spelling

field

show examples

, changing

job

role from

one

field

to another

field

wouldn’t be a good decision.

As changing

Change preposition

Changing

show examples

one

industry to another industry needs to ability to learn a new skill,

Correct your spelling

adapt

show examples

adopt

Correct your spelling

adapt

show examples

to the changes in

relates

Replace the word

relation

show examples

to that

filed

Correct your spelling

field

show examples

and

Fix the infinitive

apply

show examples

search for opportunities . Overall, it would be a fresh start from the beginning which involves time, money and energy. To conclude,

this

essay argued that changing

job

role

Fix the agreement mistake

roles

show examples

is considered as skating on thin ice while I reckon sticking to your own

career

and expanding your horizons in the same

filed

Correct your spelling

field

show examples

would have a better prospect in life.

Submitted by 09_hones_copy on Fri Sep 02 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

271 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
A group of individuals present the view that all criminals should be treated with similar punishment, whereas others believe there should be varied penalties due to the offenders’ crimes. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.
<4
band
In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relavent examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 workds.
Children sometimes needs to know that everything in this life is not easy to achieve. The advantages of giving they message to encourage them that they could achieve anything are they could work hard for something that they dream of. second, they would done anything with sacrifices, and the last, they would utilize their time in a good way.
6.5
band
Some children spend hours every day on smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The 21st century is a world of technology, and every person on the planet has a cell phone. Youths who have grown up in these circumstances are going into smartphones. I believe that children should not spend their time on their handphones daily. The reasons are twofold.
5
band
Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact on society due to this?
A large chunk of the population likes to see wrongdoing on TV or on the silver screen. But the motive of viewing this genre is different for different people.
5.5
band
completing university education is thought by some to be best way to get a job. On other hand, other people think that getting a job and developing soft skill is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
Is education is important than gaining a professional practice? Although most people think to pursue higher studies to get better job placement, while others assume that gaining practice and developing technical skills are top priority. This essay will discuss why gaining a degree has a benefit, but why getting a work training and learning new techniques is more beneficial.

Some people think that an employee should change his career or field of work at least once. However, other think that employees should not change his career and stay in the job for the entire life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend hours every day on smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact on society due to this?

completing university education is thought by some to be best way to get a job. On other hand, other people think that getting a job and developing soft skill is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?