You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to your colleague who is the person in charge of the seminar and ask for: Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

Dear
Mr.
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John, I am writing
this
letter to enquire about the “Artificial Intelligence” seminar which is going to
held
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on 5th July 2022. I and a few teammates are very keen to attend the session as the knowledge of advanced technology will enhance our skillset. I am looking for information regarding the program. Please provide me schedule and duration of the curriculum.
Additionally
, I would be grateful if you could
also
share the agenda of the session along with who is going to the session and what topics will be covered. We are very delighted about the course as the Robotics expertise will help us to resolve the many problems and helps in our current job. Our expertise could be useful to other staff members.
Hence
, I would
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like to know about the pricing of each
participants
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and if there is
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for
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discount
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because we are more than 5
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. I hope, you will consider our group and provide us with the best deal. Yours Faithfully, Fancy
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