The best way for the government to solve the traffic congestion problem in cities is to provide free bus service 24 hours a day and 7 days a week To what extent doy you agree or disagree

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Congestion,
problem
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is severe for citizens
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these days. They spend long
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on a
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. Some
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argue that free bus facility is the only solution for that cause I will disagree with
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statement and gave a solid solution. To start with,
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jam is at peak level
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day
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and night
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.some people gave arguments to overcome
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problem by free of cost subway service .
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,
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utility is not effective because it needed
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of investment and
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track for that service .
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, mature and young go to school and their work at 9am and come back
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home at 7 pm .That,s why
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hours
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are very busy and crowdy .So ,
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occur on
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again and they feel uncomfortable on
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roads
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the roads
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and not
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their work
at
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time Specifically , free shuttle and train service work only
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day
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hours
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while , they have no separate tracks and it
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stuck
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stuck
in
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government should
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important
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role to solve
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the blockage
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of
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on
roads
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.
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to that,
administration
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should make new
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in a city which contain flyovers for every exit .
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,
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a display
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road
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map on social websites and in markets .
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, make
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signals in every chowk and employ
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wardens in the police .These wardens guide people toward
right
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road
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where they easily passed daily routine congestion .most of all , rules and
regulation
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were played
sufficient
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part in our daily life .if you
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on
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road
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the road
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you just follow
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lane principle .For knowledge , according to the report published by "the BBC " china is the only country where
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the jam
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is not happened
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in daily routine because their 80% population follow rules .
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, if a country managed
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the budget
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for free travelling
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they make separate highways where have no entry for irrelevant
vehicle
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vehicles
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. To sum.up
all
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overcrowding is a
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severe
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issue in major cities. Mostly argued that free subway assistance is used to solve over- transport
cause
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. while according to
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new
roads
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and
traffic
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signal
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played
sufficient
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part to tackled
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happening
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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