The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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the percentages of industrial use
and domestic use
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in South America, Most of the water
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in Europe, again industries
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most of the water
around 53% while
Agricultural use
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(15%). Next in Africa, 84% water
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industries
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