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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

#salary #job #satisfaction
Today cost of living
become
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 more expensive than it used to be.
As a result
, no one will dispute the importance of
salary
,
however
, in my opinion, it is not the main factor to keep employees engaged. In
this
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 I will discuss why I think job satisfaction is far better than a big
salary
.
First
 and foremost, almost everything can be purchased but happiness. We can observe that wealthy people who show off their
welnance
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reliance
 most time feel alone. Whereas, individuals from deprived
background
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 savour the moment by doing what they love.
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Even though
Eventhough
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Even though
 my former employer raised my
salary
 a few times, I was laid off because I feel like job satisfaction is superior big
salary
. Another overlooked reason is that companies will suffer from disinterested employees if they only use
a
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promotion as the only tool for workers to engage. It is not unreasonable to assume that the best work is that grew up from the hobby. Corporations will acquire a higher income and closer relationship between employees if they spend their budget on team building rather than on
salary
 increases. Indeed, huge IT giants
such
 as Google, Meta and Apple allocate a big portion of their yearly expenses
on
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 events that brings different departments together. In conclusion, most of the candidates ask about
salary
 during interviews.
However
, they are interested not only in the net value but
also
 in social activities which can make their work process less stressful and as a consequence it will boost job satisfaction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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