Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) What part of the service would you like to change?

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Hello Sir / Madam,

This

is Ahmad who is one of your daily customers.I am writing

this

letter due to some problems that I have faced recently. In the beginning, recently, you have removed the internet from the bus

station

additionally

, the USB ports have been removed from there.

Furthermore

, the air conditioning has been removed from there. The

second

point I would like to point to is that I am facing a plethora of problems while I am at the bus

station

. To start, I can not follow up on my work while I am at the

station

, as you have removed the internet from there.

In addition

to ,that I can not recharge my mobile phones.

This

is because you have removed the USB ports at the

station

Moreover

, it is hot in summer, and I can not stand

this

weather, as you have removed the air conditioning. One

last

thing I would like to say is that you have to upgrade some parts of your service.

This

is because you have to achieve your customers' needs.

Firstly

, you may upgrade the loss policy, customers can lose their bags or wallets.

Secondly

, you should reassess the price of tickets, as some of the prices are fairly high. I look forward to meeting you in person to know

such

a personality who likes to help people and is always welcoming people's complaints. If there are any new updates, please call me. Faithfully, Ahmad Mohamed Sayed.

Submitted by ahmadhassan1694 on Wed Sep 21 2022

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