You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel You should write at least 150 words.

#minutes #weekend #hotel #arrangements #type #rooms #cost #activities #places #interest

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Dear Mr./Mrs., I am writing

this

letter

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because

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we are planning to spend a weekend at

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your

hotel

and we have to know about some details. we hope to enjoy with

seaside

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the seaside

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hotel

. Because of

reason

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,reason

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We selected your

hotel

. We will

arrange

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start our vacation 25

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the

Saturday morning at 7.00a.m and

leaving

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leave

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26th Sunday at 9.00p.m

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, we have 12

persons

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for accommodation. So, we hope to get 3 double

room

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rooms

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, with A/C and 3 beads and 2 single rooms with 2 beads and

non A/C

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. If you can create

a amount

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of charges, I can reserve advance payment quickly. So,

this

is my via email [email protected]

and

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apply

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please send

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your full payment and Account details.

Then

, Shall we arrange some kind of events for kids extern your schedule ? and what kind of activities

have

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there

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are.

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On the other

hand

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our main request is Sea cart activities and we love

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them

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. In ,addition we want to participate

swimming

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in swimming

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Items. So, we like to spend our journey with your

hotel

and we will hope

your

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for your

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best reaction to us.

Then

, if you need to know some details please call or email

for

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me. Thank you

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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sincerely Gayathri

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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