You recently heard about some new jobs at a local department store. You would like to work there. Write a letter to store manager of the department store. In your letter, -Explain how you heard about the job -Describe the kind of job you would like to have -Give details of your experience and qualifications

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Hello Manager, I am ecstatic to write

this

letter as I have seen an advertisement for open positions for a few software engineers at your company.

In addition

, I found the same news even in the Facebook marketplace with the number of positions and locations as well.

Firstly

, I have profound experience in software development programs despite my solid academic track record at a reputed university in the United States of America.

On the other hand

, I obtained a merit certificate as I planned and delivered the project with phenomenal success.

Last

but not least I am a multitask personality with a fast learning approach all the way. Having said that, I have been working for a reputed client in North America for the

last

10 years.

In addition

this

, I use to develop a few custom programs and handover to the government of the United States.

Furthermore

, I am the visiting faculty of Seattle University and I am happy to teach along with my daily job activities. I look forward to hearing your feedback on

this

letter and

also

enclosed my resume along with a few references. Yours Faithfully, Lakshmi.

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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