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The amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Leisure time in a typical week in hour- by sex and employment status, 1998-99.

#amount #leisure #time #men #women #employment #status #week #hour- #sex
The graph shows the picture of leisure
time
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spend
spended
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spent
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 by
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 of different employment
status
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statuses
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 in 1998-1999.
First
 of all, it is clear that in part-
time
 employed and
housewives
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housewife
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 statuses there were no men
envolved
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involved
. To compare two of those statuses, it is
obviously
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, that housewives had more free
time
that
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than
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 part-
time
 employed women. Nextly, it is not a
surprice
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surprise
 that there was a lot of similarity
for
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 unemployed and retired statuses. People from those two categories had the highest amount of leisure
time
. In the end, for full-
time
 employed men and
women
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,women
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 there was
noticeable
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a noticeable
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 tendency that
male
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males
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have
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to have
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 more
time
 for entertainment than
female
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females
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.
Moreover
,
those trend
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 was
also
 true for
unemployed
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the unemployed
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 and retired categories. On
the
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apply
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top of that, we can
also
 see
a
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apply
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2 times
dirrefence
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difference
divergence
 between
free
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the free
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time
 of employed men and women and leisure
time
 of retired or unemployed people.
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