Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly by a high percentage of young people going to universities. Others argue that it only leads to a higher unemployment rate. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

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is the start of an individual's higher education and is an essential requirement for employment. There are a number of pros as well as cons of attending

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and a few of them are outlined below. Going to

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provides the young generation

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opportunity to develop social skills while

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to the journey of turning into an adult. It helps young

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become more

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independent

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as they become less

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on their

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.

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benefits the country's younger citizens greatly as they start living like adults. It

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aids them to make their own decisions for themselves. A

degree

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is often the bare minimum required for a job.

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, owning a

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from a

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can be quite helpful to an individual. It

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increases the chances of one getting a job. In simpler terms, the probability of a person with a

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getting employed would be significantly higher than that of a potential employee without a

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. Another added benefit of a

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is that the salary of workers with a

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is comparatively higher as opposed to someone without one. There are a number of drawbacks of universities as well. Primarily,

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is extremely expensive. Even with a partial scholarship, the cost of living along with the fees would have many students taking out loans.

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, the competition between

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would

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is mainly because freshly graduated students with no experience would cause tough competition between

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applying for jobs. The competition between potential employees for the job market

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would almost always exist in the world.

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is a phenomenon that cannot be prevented by any means.

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, in my opinion, young

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should always choose

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university

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for their own betterment in the future.