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The map illustrates the development of two

places

Meadowside and

Fonton

Correct your spelling

Font on

happened during three time periods (1962,1985 & the Present). Overall,

Initially

, there were very less facilities available at

both

places

. There was only one road on Meadow side connecting the northern part to the west, whereas,

Fonton

Correct your spelling

Font on

had no roads but a

railway

line connecting north and east. Presently,

both

have developed into a single place with many new facilities and connecting rail and road systems. In 1962,

both

were isolated

places

with very limited facilities and connections.

However

, later in 1985, a new road connecting

both

places

was built and many new infrastructures were added to the village.

Furthermore

, nowadays the village has developed into a suburb joining

Fonton

Correct your spelling

Font on

Fenton

. Now, we have a leisure complex, a supermarket and a new residential complex in Meadowside. Presently,

Fonton

railway

line has expanded

further

east and a new

railway

station has been built. Adjacent to the

railway

station now we have a business park and a new hotel.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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