There are many female students who finish degrees in science and technology courses at university, but few move into the workplace after they graduate. Why is this? What measures can be taken to encourage them into work?

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The map illustrates the development of two
places
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Meadowside and
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Fonton
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Font on
happened during three time periods (1962,1985 & the Present). Overall,
Initially
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, there were very less facilities available at
both
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places
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. There was only one road on Meadow side connecting the northern part to the west, whereas,
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Fonton
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Font on
had no roads but a
railway
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line connecting north and east. Presently,
both
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have developed into a single place with many new facilities and connecting rail and road systems. In 1962,
both
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were isolated
places
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with very limited facilities and connections.
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, later in 1985, a new road connecting
both
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places
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was built and many new infrastructures were added to the village.
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, nowadays the village has developed into a suburb joining
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Fonton
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Fenton
. Now, we have a leisure complex, a supermarket and a new residential complex in Meadowside. Presently,
Fonton
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's
railway
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line has expanded
further
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east and a new
railway
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station has been built. Adjacent to the
railway
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station now we have a business park and a new hotel.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal beliefs
  • recruitment process
  • work-life balance
  • career advancement
  • gender biases
  • mentorship opportunities
  • salary disparities
  • role models
  • financial compensation
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