big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagre?

High

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paying salary is more important than

job

fulfilment.

This

essay

desagress

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disagrees

disagree

with

this

statement because

employees

will spend eight hours the

next

twenty-five

years

of their life, so it is vital to have some gratification in people's

job

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, and the quality of our performance is impacted when we are

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doing

doig

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doing

what we really like.

Sense

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of well-being is vital to

perfom

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perform

a

job

because

employees

will spend the

next

twenty-five

years

of their lives doing over and over the same

job

, so it will be crucial to feel fulfilment by doing it.

Firstly

, it is essential to find gratification in our

job

because these activities will be

perfome

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performed

perform

for so many

years

that not doing what we like, would be a

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night mare

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for anyone.

Secondly

, some of the

employees

are requested to

work

overtime by the company, so

this

imply

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to continue doing what we love to do for a living.

For instance

, at Fullerton College in

California

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a group of scientists started an investigation which states that workers who

work

in the

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field

fiel

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field

they love are more prompted to get a promotion because they perform a

high quality

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job

for pleasure and not with an intention to look for a high salary. The quality of a

job

is strongly impacted when people

work

in the area they like, so the outcomes most of the time are

oustanding

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outstanding

performance.

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citizens tend to be

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responsible

responsabiles

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responsible

and empathetic with issues presented in their jobs because they feel

concern

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about their

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workplace

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work place

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.

However

,

for

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those who

work

in a field where they are disliked, they tend to ignore the issues presented at

work

because they see

this

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hurdles as an opportunity to change a

job

. They feel no compromise or attachment with their

job

. To explain

further

, in The United States studies

states

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that

employees

who feel some pleasure

with

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in

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their jobs tend to be flexible with

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their work's

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work's

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schedule and accept more

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responsibilities

responsabilities

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responsibilities

at

job

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a job

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because they feel comfortable doing that particular

job

. To conclude,

job

satisfaction is more important than having a

high paying

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high-paying

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salary because

employees

will expend many

years

performing the same

job

that would be no sense working in a place where a person does not feel

sense

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a sense

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of well-being for having that

job

. After all, money is important but not crucial

like

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as

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job

satisfaction.