As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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satisfaction
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for a happy professional carrier for adults. Many factors are considered to have a
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job
. In most
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the
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cases
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people
work
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in
a
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irrelevent
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irrelevant
job
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family pressure or compulsive requirement they may not have
job
satisfaction
in reality. In
this
essay, I will explain the reasons for doing
such
compulsive jobs
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interest
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.
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satisfaction
is
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gauged
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basic
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factor
is
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enjoying what we do. There is a saying if we love what we do,
then
no day we will work. If a surgeon likes
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surgery.
Then
doing operations will bring happiness. If someone loves art,
then
he will enjoy working in an art gallery.
However
, if you
also
get the proper motivation and
on
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job
trainings
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to excel
your
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skills in the same field which you love doing
then
you will be motivated and the outcome of work will always be positive . For
me
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financial reward is not
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for
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job
satisfaction
. If you love what you do, and you get paid for what you enjoy
then
it's a bonus.
However
, it is not the same scenario with many
people
, due to
the
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family pressures or financial requirements
people
do works which
is
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not
of
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their wish. A person after their
sudies
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studies
or after
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attaining
18
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he is forced to do
job
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in
many
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middle class or lower
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families in India. For an instance, in
Mumbai
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a survey found
60
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% of marketing jobs are actually done by
people
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field.
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we
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interviewed
interviwed
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interviewed
an employee who was an
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engineering
engeneering
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student
works
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as a sales representative for a pharmacy company. when asked why he was doing the
job
he said he has
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do
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that
job
so as to support his parents and family financially. He is not interested
to
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the
job
but he does for feeding his family.
Therefore
burdens of family
pushes
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them to do the
job
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without
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with out
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without
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their
likes
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.
Job
availability
also
cannot be skipped .
People
passing out from their schools only 40% get jobs rest do works as they get mostly not in their field of choice. In my opinion,
job
satisfaction
is a gift of
life
in adulthood. We may earn lots of money,
have
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a dream house until we are satisfied with
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our job
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job
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jobs
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we cannot have a
stress free
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life
. When we look back at our
life
we should never regret back that we earned lots of money but did not enjoy our
life
.
Therefore
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satisfaction
is very
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crucial
crusial
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crucial
many don't get
due
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to
the
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family pressures or financial burdens.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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