Climate change is one of the biggest environmental problems of the 21st century. Some people think that humans should stop using oil, gas and coal and switch to alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others claim that fossil fuels are essential for many industries, and not using them will result in economic recession. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

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Climate
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change is one of the greatest challenges of our time. Equally important,
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, is the need to ensure access to
energy
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for quality of life and for economic
development
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. It is
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critically important to address
climate
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change as
part
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of the sustainable
development
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agenda. Ongoing progress in the
development
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of new
technologies
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has brought confidence and hope that these objectives will be met in the
energy
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system
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. Dramatic price reductions and technological advancement of wind generators and solar photovoltaics have shown that these renewable
energy
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resources can be important players in global electricity systems
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and that the long-anticipated breakthrough in cost-effective storage technology would shift primary
energy
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mixes substantially. These developments have led invariably to an assumption that we are “done” with fossil
fuels
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across the
energy
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system
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, that there is no need for
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development
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of new resources, and that we have to stop using them as soon as possible.
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assumption has
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led to a perception of “good” renewables-based
technologies
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in global
energy
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systems today, on the one hand, and “bad” fossil
fuels
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-based
technologies
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, on the other. The reality is that
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debate is much more nuanced and requires
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thorough investigation. Carbon capture and storage (CCS) technology and managing methane
emissions
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throughout the fossil
energy
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value chain can help meet ambitious CO2 emission reduction targets, while fossil
fuels
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remain
part
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of the
energy
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system
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.
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will thereby allow fossil
fuels
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to become "
part
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of the solution", rather than remain "
part
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of the problem". All
technologies
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have a role to play in an
energy
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system
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guided by rational economics. Fossil
fuels
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comprise 80 per cent of
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global primary
energy
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demand, and the
energy
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system
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is the source of approximately
two thirds
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of global CO2
emissions
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. Inasmuch as methane and
other short-lived
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another short-lived climate pollutant
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climate
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pollutant (SLCP)
emissions
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are believed to be severely underestimated, it is likely that
energy
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production and use are the
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of an even greater share of
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, much of
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biomass
fuels
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are currently used around the world in
small scale
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heating and cooking. These are highly inefficient and polluting, especially for indoor air quality in many less-developed countries. Renewable biomass used in
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way is a problem for sustainable
development
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. If current trends continue,
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, if the current share of fossil
fuels
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is maintained and
energy
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demand nearly doubles by 2050,
emissions
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will greatly surpass the amount of carbon that can be emitted if the global average temperature rise is to be limited to 2oC. That level of
emissions
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would have disastrous
climate
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consequences for the planet. There are a number of emission reduction opportunities for the
energy
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sector, notably reducing the amount of
energy
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consumed and reducing the net carbon intensity of the
energy
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sector by fuel switching and by controlling CO2
emissions
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.
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