Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. does this development have more advantages or disadvantages ?

In recent years, staying far from parents and friends for the

shake

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of

job

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a job

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has become trendy in our society.

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, individuals may benefit financially through better

job

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jobs

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at

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in

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remote

place

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places

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but

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certainly the drawbacks of living away from family outweigh the positive side of the fact. In the subsequent paragraphs,

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will be explaining the inconveniences incorporated with living far away

home

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from home

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.

To begin

with, doing a

full time

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job

at any distant place barely

let

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a person

to

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visit his/her family so often for

which

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social cohesion tends to be fragile as people lack physical

connnectivity

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connectivity

. A number of

such

incident

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incidents

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can be found in our surroundings;

for instance

,

one

of my

neighbor

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almost has no connection with their son who left home years ago to join his dream

job

and never came back since

then

. Though the son sends

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amount of money

for

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to

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his parents

but

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it does not compensate

his

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for his

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absence

to

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from

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the parents and gradually the bond between them has been lost. another point worth mentioning is that

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living alone in an unfamiliar place can severely impact

one

's

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spiritual

spritual

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spiritual

peace. To be more specific,

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together with family members or friends after

office

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the office

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helps people to release the stresses and pressures from

workplace

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the workplace

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whereas

one

has to be alone at home with all the workloads in their head since no

one

will be there to talk.

Thus

, many people suffer from anxiety leading to

further

mental and physical disorders. In conclusion, living far away for the purpose of

profession

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a profession

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might be beneficiary to financial development but it ruins

one

's happiness

through

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by

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affecting social

bond

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bonds

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and personal

wellbeing

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well-being

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which is not worthwhile at all.