The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The prompt illustrates the debate on cash versus a
credit
card
. Moreover
, in the history of the finance sector, credit
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the credit
card
concept is new come whereas paper
money
is still going more demanding
by individuals. From my perspective, I will mostly agree Replace the word
demand
credit
card
concept is best
payment method Correct article usage
the best
than
cash Change preposition
over
money
by
Change preposition
for
following
two reasons.
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the following
First
of all, Paper
money
has been going from long
time history whereas many Correct article usage
a long
people
do exchange the
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apply
money
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from
form
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from
countries
to Fix the agreement mistake
country
countries
. But In Fix the agreement mistake
country
morden
era, the Correct your spelling
modern
credit
card
craze is more popular and also
convenient. In addition
, we can save paper
so that lots of trees can be save
. Change the verb form
be saved
Some times
, Correct your spelling
Sometimes
paper
money
gets destroy
when Wrong verb form
destroyed
they
would be old Correct pronoun usage
it
paper
but in
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with
credit
card
does not happen Fix the agreement mistake
cards
this
type of issues.
Secondly
, the
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apply
credit
card
is more suitable for Correct article usage
a person
person
and Replace the word
personal
also
more economic. Credit
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The credit
card
concept would be more
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a more
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effective
effectives
strategy for reducing Correct your spelling
effective
the
black Correct article usage
apply
money
as well as corruption. Robbery of paper
money
would be less while in credit
card
lots of security option is avaliable
, person aware security about own cards. Correct your spelling
available
For instance
, when any credit
card
stole by someone then
we can inform the Bank that they can easily block the card
within few
minutes and robbers can not access the Correct article usage
a few
card
but in the case of paper
money
, once they gone
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are gone
then
hardly they
meet. So government should be aware Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
about the benefits of credit
card
and set up Fix the agreement mistake
cards
the
camps. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, lots of benefit
is available Change to a plural noun
benefits
of
Change preposition
for
credit
card
, whereas
they can receive Correct word choice
where
the
more vouchers, gift cards, as well as discount Correct article usage
apply
coupen
when Correct your spelling
coupon
coupons
pay
for items.
In the Nutshell, the Change the verb form
paying
credit
card
payment method is effective
than cash Correct quantifier usage
more effective
money
. However
, some people
will not accept this
method because overall worlds, some people
can not affords
Change the verb form
afford
credit
card
because they does
not open Change the verb form
do
bank
account. They would rather stick with Correct article usage
a bank
paper
money
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