You want to book a hotel that one of your friends recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. In your letter, explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay ask what will be included in the price enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that, I am planning to visit your

hotel

on the 1st weekend of

month; December. One of my friends visited your place recently and suggested to me that your

hotel

is a lovely destination for a family outing which is located adjacent to a lovely beach with a nice view of the sea.

Hence

, as proposed by my friend, I would like to have one of your Suites at the top level facing the ocean which contains two bedrooms and a private living area. Since I am expecting to spend some quality time with my family after a long time, I am hoping to have all meals from your

hotel

Hence

, please let me know the prices for a full board package for 4 persons including taxes and surcharges. Since I am new to the town of your

hotel

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would be great if you can suggest some places , so I could visit if time permits.

Moreover

Also

, please specify the in-house activities I can enjoy in your

hotel

as well. I looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ryne

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

195 words

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