You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was good about the food and the services

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Dear Sir or Madam I am delighted to share my feelings about your restaurant that I visited with my friends
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week to celebrate my natal day.I would like to thank you for your high-quality service. As I mentioned above, I and my friends gathered together and went to your location about 1 week ago.The primary reason for choosing your enterprise was that it was highly recommended by my cousin. On the occasion of my ,birthday we made a decision to celebrate it in any restaurant because we have an ongoing tradition that we organize a celebration for each particular date.
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,it was one of the most unforgettable days that I have ever lived. Everything went smoothly.All staff were very hospitable and friendly which is why we did not have any problems with regard to service.
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,the meals were well-prepared and delicious especially Italian dishes
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as pizza.I congrats you to have
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professional chefs.All of us were happy with the restaurant's services, food and decorations. Thank you for your attention! Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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