As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute jobs satisfaction ? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers ?

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most
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works
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satisfaction
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is vital to be happy and
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satisfaction
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and express why I think trying to
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pleasant situation can be realistic. The
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factor I should mention is that a high wage can have the inevitable effect on
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to be fine,
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means salary is the more important reason to
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for everyone, so being well-paid is mentioned by most
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people
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role to be satisfied. To be
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and subject of
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must be suitable for someone who hire to conduct that, it must have the same
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capacity, experience and ability
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workers.
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more thing to have
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satisfaction
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atmosphere
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atmosphere
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enough
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employee can not do their best.
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, I had to leave my
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salary there,
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expectations
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for all workers can be hard to access, I think it is not a fiction situation. Nowadays importance of human
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is approved in all companies, and a lot of ways and
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methods
are recognized to hire and maintain
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employees, so I believe that making
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satisfied can be easy just if employers try to use those ways.
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, there are
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various
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various
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satisfaction
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, so even if accessing to
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high
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can not be realistic, striving to have the lower levels can be
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, paying
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salary can be really hard for all workers, but creating some inventive ways to have
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energetic and
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peaceful
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place is possible. To sum up, because of the important role of
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satisfaction
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in all
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life, by mentioning the main factors like paying good
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salaries
, considering suitable
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position
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for each one, and having
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a positive
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workplace
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work place
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satisfaction
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cab be reachable.
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obtaning
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obtaining
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of
fullfillment
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fulfilment
is really hard but by being creative and systematic it can happen.
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