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Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In our modern world,the use of video
games
 and
television
 among children
have
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 increased drastically.
However
, some people are of the opinion that it has some negative impact
for
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on
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 a
child
's mental status.I totally disagree with
this
 opinion. Children that play video game often terms to have
good
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a good
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 developmental stage by learning about
problem solving
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problem-solving
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 approach and initiative, it
also
help
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helps
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 the thinking ability of a
child
.
For instance
,
Motal
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Metal
 combats,which is a common game
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planned
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planed
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played
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 by boys, help them to think of ways to fight the
valian
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valiant
 to win,thereby teaching them to be independent to fight any obstacles in the real world. Another common example is cooking fever and Fashion
games
 which
is
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are
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 common among girls, these
games
 help the girl
child
 to learn to develop their cooking skills and proper grooming.
However
, watching
of
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apply
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television
 most especially
news
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the news
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 will help a
child
 to be updated
of
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on
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 all the happenings in
the
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society. In
a
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the
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 case of any war,
earthquakes
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earthquake
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 or pandemic,it will be announced
in
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on
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the
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apply
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television
 so everyone will know the safety precautions to undergo.
In addition
,there
also
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are also
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 some entertaining shows on
television
such
 as Mr bean and
cartoon
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cartoons
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 like Tom and Jerry which help in the relaxation of
mind
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the mind
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. In conclusion,there
is
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are
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 upsides and downsides in everything but the use of video
games
 and
television
 with parental
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guidance
guildance
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guidance
 will have
impact
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an impact
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in
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on
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a child
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child
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child's
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 mental status.
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