You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged. Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter: – Explain why you are unhappy – Request a refund – Make arrangements to return the damaged item

#item #store #retailer #request #refund #arrangements

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter regarding the commodity I bought you recently. Let me discuss my problem and my request in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, I want to say when my commodity arrived it was damaged so I can not use that,

Furthermore

, I am completely sad because I waited about one week for arrived. For

this

reason, I want to refund my money so I have to buy another one

also

I do have not much time.

Moreover

, I suggest someone will come and take back the goods.

For example

one of your employees or snap is not different to me.

Although

, I am really worried about time as well as I am Entirely in a hurry to see that I must get ready for my exam and I need to have these goods. Writing to your reply, Your Faithfully. Saeed Sam.

Submitted by saeedforoghi538 on Thu Nov 17 2022

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

156 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to express my disappointment
I regret to inform you that
I am dissatisfied with the item I received
The item arrived damaged
The product is in unsatisfactory condition
I expected better quality
I would like to request a refund
I kindly ask for your assistance in resolving this matter
I would appreciate it if you could provide instructions
I suggest arranging a pick-up service
I expect a prompt response and resolution
I hope for a satisfactory outcome

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