Task 1 Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: what are the changes what are the problems you are facing what part of the service would you like to change Write at least 150 words. You get 20 minutes to complete this task.

Hi Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to let you know my concern regarding recent changes made to the
bus
and bearing service number is 23456. Previously the
bus
starts
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at 8:00 PM now it has changed to 10:30 PM which is quite uncomfortable time for most the working professionals.
Firstly
, I am an regular traveller to use
this
transport
along with
my collegues to reach our colony. Secondaly, my office work will ends by 7: 30 PM after that I will take 20 min walk to reach the busstop everyday and immeditaly will get in to the vehicle and reach my home by 8:40 PM. beacuse of
this
change in time, had to wait almost 150 miniutes to catch the
bus
.
In addition
to
this
change most of the poeple who are using the service distrubed with their sleep. It will be good if we change the service back to the original timings or at least start the
bus
before 9:00 PM so that people will manage their timings
accordingly
wiht out wasting of time and sleep by waiting at the busstop. Please consider my request and do the needful. Yours faithfully, Varra Maruthi Reddy
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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