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You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam

#job #employment #agency #sort #skills #sir #madam
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Shikha, and I am looking for a full-time
job
 as a
Project
 Manager. I have completed my graduation in Electronics and Communication in 2012 with Grade A. Along with that, I have done 6 months of training in PHP to pursue my carrier in an IT company.
Also
, I have experience of 2 years working as a
Project
 Co-ordinator in an IT company, I just left my
job
 2 months ago due to my health issues. I know how to deal with clients, and how to manage a team of 10-15 developers.
Furthermore
, I
also
 know various
Project
 Management tools
such
 as Basecamp, Trello, Slack etcetera. I would like to have
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 type of
job
, where I can use my skills and enhance them more. I would love to be working as a
Project
 Manager of the eCommerce team. I hope you'll find a relevant
job
 for me if possible. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment agency
  • full-time job
  • industry
  • position level
  • responsibilities
  • relevant experience
  • job titles
  • achievements
  • technical skills
  • soft skills
  • certifications
  • training
  • eagerness
  • suitable candidate
  • availability
  • interviews
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