You recently went shopping at a department store and you were disrespected by one of the employees. Write a complaint letter to the sales manager of the deportment store . In your letter you should Let him /her know about the rude behavior of the clerk. Clearly state how it happened. And tell the manager about the bad behavior.

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Dear

store

director. Let me introduce myself to you, I am a customer who bought from your

store

yesterday and I have a complaint. I bought an umbrella from your

store

yesterday and one of your assistants treated me rudely. I asked for information about the product I was receiving, but your assistant treated me badly. Read my letter and make your own conclusions and tell your assistants to teach them how to treat customers well.

This

is my complaint and application. Write a reply to my letter. If all your assistants treat customers badly I think your

store

's Customers will decrease. With respect and

honor

Change the spelling

honour

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, Maftuna.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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1Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

107 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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