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You recently went shopping at a department store and you were disrespected by one of the employees. Write a complaint letter to the sales manager of the deportment store . In your letter you should Let him /her know about the rude behavior of the clerk. Clearly state how it happened. And tell the manager about the bad behavior.

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Dear
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Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 director. Let me introduce myself to you, I am a customer who bought from your
store
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 yesterday and I have a complaint. I bought an umbrella from your
store
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

 yesterday and one of your assistants treated me rudely. I asked for information about the product I was receiving, but your assistant treated me badly. Read my letter and make your own conclusions and tell your assistants to teach them how to treat customers well.
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 is my complaint and application. Write a reply to my letter. If all your assistants treat customers badly I think your
store
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

's Customers will decrease. With respect and
honor
Change the spelling
honour

The spelling of honor is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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, Maftuna.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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