You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to you to enquire about the request that I had raised for a new chequebook two weeks ago. I have had an account with your bank for the

last

16 years and

this

is my bank account number 123 456 789. I accidentally misplaced my chequebook and had requested for a new one to be delivered to my address at least two weeks back.

However

, I still have not heard back or received the chequebook yet. I

also

visited the branch to ask about the same

last

week and was asked to leave as the bank was short-staffed; since

then

I have visited the branch at least two times, but have not yet gotten a response from anyone. Could you please let me know what the issue is? And how much longer would I have to wait to get a new one issued? I shall be obliged if you could pay consideration to the above-mentioned matter. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Sam Smith

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secondly
thirdly
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moreover
also
for example
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therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

171 words

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