The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures show the amount of
sodium
, saturated fat, and added sugar
in four different typical meals.
It is clear that
dinner
has the largest share of sodium
, and saturated fat with 43% and 37% respectively while
added sugar
is the largest in a snack with 42%.
The sodium
chart shows that the percentage
of sodium
in dinner
is just over two fifth while
it is the lowest in snacks and breakfast with only 14% for each. Lunch
comes after dinner
with almost a third.
As for the Saturated fat chart , the highest percentage
is in dinner
with 37% while
the lowest percentage
is in breakfast with only 16%. the second and the third percentage
is for lunch
and snacks with 26%. and 21 % respectively.
As expected the highest percentage
of added sugar
is in snacks with 42% while
lunch
and dinner
are nearly the same with almost a fifth for lunch
, and 23% for dinner
. breakfast holds the least percentage
of added sugar
with only 16%.Submitted by mahmoud.maged92 on
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