The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures show the amount of
sodium
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, saturated fat, and added
sugar
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in four different typical meals.
It is clear that
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dinner
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has the largest share of
sodium
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, and saturated fat with 43% and 37% respectively
while
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added
sugar
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is the largest in a snack with 42%. The
sodium
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chart shows that the
percentage
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of
sodium
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in
dinner
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is just over two fifth
while
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it is the lowest in snacks and breakfast with only 14% for each.
Lunch
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comes after
dinner
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with almost a third. As for the Saturated fat chart , the highest
percentage
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is in
dinner
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with 37%
while
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the lowest
percentage
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is in breakfast with only 16%. the second and the third
percentage
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is for
lunch
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and snacks with 26%. and 21 % respectively. As expected the highest
percentage
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of added
sugar
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is in snacks with 42%
while
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lunch
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and
dinner
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are nearly the same with almost a fifth for
lunch
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, and 23% for
dinner
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. breakfast holds the least
percentage
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of added
sugar
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with only 16%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, dinner, percentage, lunch with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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