You have recently attended a job interview but the company did not give you the feedback yet. Write a letter to the human resources manager asking him/her about the result of the interview. In your letter:- - Introduce yourself and the job you have applied for. - Describe how you did well in the interview - Reasons for asking a prompt interview result
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to a job
interview
which I participated in your company
two weeks ago. I have not just learned the result of my interview
and I could not take any feedback, so I decided to write this
letter. I hope that you will give me a positive answer and I will be accepted your
team.
I am Change preposition
by your
a
experienced electrical engineer Change the article
an
about
construction projects. I have finished many different projects Change preposition
in
for
15 years. When I was researching new projects, I came Change preposition
over
accross
your Correct your spelling
across
company
. I applied for a new project in your company
last
month. I am a
very suitable for Change the article
apply
this
position as a chef of electical
works. I attended a job Correct your spelling
electrical
interview
in your company
two weeks ago. I think that I explained comprehensively my work experienced
. From my point of view, I was very successful during the Wrong verb form
experience
interview
. Because I answered clearly all the questions that were asked to
me. Change preposition
of
Therefore
, human
resource Correct article usage
the human
staffs
liked me and I think they reported that I am Fix the agreement mistake
staff
suitable
person for Add an article
the suitable
a suitable
this
position. Next
month, my current project will finish, so I am appliying
Correct your spelling
applying
different
companies now and I am joining some job interviews. But, I would like to work Change preposition
to different
your
Change preposition
for your
company
and
new project. I must choose a Change preposition
on and
company
in the next
two weeks. This
is
means I have not got much time, so I decided to write Unnecessary verb
apply
this
letter. I would be grateful if you accept me for this
position.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Orhan Veli ÇanakçıSubmitted by orhanveli2006 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite