You have recently attended a job interview but the company did not give you the feedback yet. Write a letter to the human resources manager asking him/her about the result of the interview. In your letter:- - Introduce yourself and the job you have applied for. - Describe how you did well in the interview - Reasons for asking a prompt interview result

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regard to a job
interview
which I participated in your
company
two weeks ago. I have not just learned the result of my
interview
and I could not take any feedback, so I decided to write
this
letter. I hope that you will give me a positive answer and I will be accepted
your
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team. I am
a
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an
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experienced electrical engineer
about
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in
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construction projects. I have finished many different projects
for
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over
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15 years. When I was researching new projects, I came
accross
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across
your
company
. I applied for a new project in your
company
last
month. I am
a
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apply
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very suitable for
this
position as a chef of
electical
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electrical
works. I attended a job
interview
in your
company
two weeks ago. I think that I explained comprehensively my work
experienced
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. From my point of view, I was very successful during the
interview
. Because I answered clearly all the questions that were asked
to
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me.
Therefore
,
human
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the human
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resource
staffs
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liked me and I think they reported that I am
suitable
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the suitable
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person for
this
position.
Next
month, my current project will finish, so I am
appliying
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applying
different
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companies now and I am joining some job interviews. But, I would like to work
your
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company
and
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on and
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new project. I must choose a
company
in the
next
two weeks.
This
is
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means I have not got much time, so I decided to write
this
letter. I would be grateful if you accept me for
this
position. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Orhan Veli Çanakçı
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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