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A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company.  In your letter,  -introduce your previous work experience  -tell the manager which department you want to work  -describe what expectation you have from the job

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Dear sir, I am Aditya Parmar. Currently, I am in the
last
 semester of my master's degree in software engineering. I came to know about a job opening in your team which align with my interests and previous work experiences. I have worked on various parts of the software development process in my
last
 three internships. I have a keen knowledge of Javascript, Frontend development and Backend services.
Furthermore
, I have hands-on experience in software testing. As you are developing a new product for an e-commerce company, I would like to work in the UI department. I assure you my current skill set will be complementary to your team and help you to fast-track the product completion. My expectation from you is to give me full responsibility to create and maintain the payment features for
this
 project. I will not get a salary for
this
 job. So, a crucial role in the project enhances my morale and help me to grow professionally. I hope I will hear from you very soon regarding the interview schedule. Thanks and Regards, Adi
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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