You are working in a school. Write a letter to the Principal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teacher in your school. In your letter – say how long you have known him/her – describe his/her qualifications – explain why you think he/she would be suitable for the job.
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Mr.
Inderpreet Singh S/O Paramjit
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Jalandhar, Punjab has been employed as Correct your spelling
district
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, as well as rubble and other debris,
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apply
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to assist
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construction
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the construction
engineer
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spraying
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machinery
types of machinery
pieces of machinery
foreman's
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.