In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?
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children
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For example
, many young people in South Korea are known to shop and visit fun places with their Linking Words
friends
rather than their Use synonyms
parents
, so as to show off the fun Use synonyms
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they engage in on Wechat, a popular social media platform.
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children
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with family.
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children
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parents
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