Write a letter informing the e-commerce online store customer desk about a damaged product you received

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Dear Sir, I

am write

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am writing

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you because of

this

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recently

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have bought

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a TV

the TV

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in your online shop but it does not

working

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work

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this

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TV does not turn on. I do not know why. You have to make the delivery so that they work faster so that buyers are not dissatisfied and you should check if

this

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TV is working or not. if you haven't solved

this

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problem

then

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customers will not

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buy

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from you. I have

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an idea

the idea

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idea

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ideas

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from

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for

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you and your online shop. If you advertise your online store

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Instagram and your goods are

well bought

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well-bought

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this

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good

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a good

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idea for you.

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more advertising and more buyers because of

this

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, you have to advertise a lot. You can

coming

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come

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up with

a new logotypes

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new logotypes

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This

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mine

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idea and request for you think you

are solved

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have solved

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this problems

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this problem

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. I am waiting for your answer. Yours faithfully

Ozod

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Ozone

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ina1_95Sun Jan 22 2023

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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Write a letter informing the e-commerce online store customer desk about a damaged product you received

The Greeting

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Education is not a luxury,but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way of getting job. On the other hand, other people think that getting expericne and skills is more important. Disucss both views and give your opinion.