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five various product category in term of the number of export earnings and the change of values proportion from 2015 to 2016.

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The chart compares the country`s export value in 5 categories between 2015 and 2016. Overall, it is evident that namely petroleum
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, engineered goods, agricultural
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 and textiles exports increased during 2015 and 2016.
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 gems and ,jewellery sales witnessed a decrease. If we look chart in more detail, Export of the product of petroleum started at 61
billion
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dollars
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 in 2015,
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 figure increased by 3% and stood at approximately 62
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dollars
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 in 2016. In 2015, the goods of engineering transport were nearly 56 million
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, before witnessing an 8.5% increase and stood at over 60
billion
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dollars
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 in the same period. Agricultural
products
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 income had a slight increase in over a year and stood at 31
billion
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. The textiles revenue had a higher profit in all of the 5 categories.
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,
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 figure began at 25
billion
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dollars
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 and grew by 15.24% and stood at 31
billion
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dollars
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 from 2015 to 2016.
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, it is interesting to note that, the
Products
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 of gems and jewellery export earnings decreased from 42
billion
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dollars
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 to 40
billion
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dollars
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 in the following years. If we should say
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 decrease in percentage it was 5.15%.
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